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Thunderous Awe

The color orange
Strikes the whole sky with brightness
Increasing splendor
It has an awesome power
Fills me with thunderous awe

Russell Sivey

Contest: Nature the popular theme
Sponsor: Kim Morrison

5/31/2013

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Jack Horne Date: 6/1/2013 4:26:00 PM beautiful tanka, my friend Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/1/2013 2:07:00 PM the thunderous line is a very unique one, Russell. I know how you love nature. Login to Reply

Maria Kyriacou Date: 6/1/2013 6:11:00 AM orange hihi I just imagined the sun setting nice short poem. Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 6/1/2013 12:02:00 AM ... well orange is my favorite color so you already have my vote, there... lol. I loved the drama in this one... Thunderous Awe (it's such an epic way of describing your amazement). Way to go on this one... I liked it! :) Login to Reply

Erich Goller Date: 5/31/2013 9:05:00 PM Thunderous indeed , that's a beautiful expressed Tanka poem, thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Erich Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/31/2013 7:25:00 PM Thunderous applause from me Russell, I am sure you will do well. Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 5/31/2013 6:16:00 PM Russell...your poem moves from start to finish...love the intensity.... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/31/2013 9:47:00 AM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visit..Make sure that you read my notation on "Light Reveals"...Sara Login to Reply