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Thunder and green mint

Thunder and green mint
The forest so lust I can taste 
the tea from here. The rain hits 
the roof as I hear the cats purr, 
I lay on my bed starring out my 
window wishing you were here 
by my side watching it with me. 
The rain it soothes my mind 
relaxes my soul and chills my 
veins I can smell your cologne 
from the room next door, you 
told me "if you sit in the rain 
long enough to hear it speak 
then you're lucky enough to 
always remember me"
I will always remember you and 
from now on every time it rains 
I promise you to sit there as 
long as I hear it speak so I will 
always remember your voice, it 
was mellow like the rain it 
made me melt and it chilled my 
Now I sit here in the rain trying 
hard to let my thoughts leave 
I'm wet inside the forest of 
green mint I hear it coming the 
wind blows and I hear you, 
"don't tell no body" this is our 
secret we had the power to 
hear it speak and once you left 
the rain washed you away so 
now everyday from January to 
march I will never forget your 
voice unless it never rains.

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Congrats to you! BG

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:24:00 PM
    Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Brittney, Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:42:00 AM
    Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 6:09:00 PM
    I like the metaphor of the rain becoming someone's voice that only you can hear. Very bittersweet emotion and sense of loss. Well done. Congrats on your win :)

    lopez Avatar brittney lopez
    Date: 7/12/2013 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 10:56:00 PM
    congrats on your awesome win............. SKAT

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 10:16:00 PM
    Brittney.. Congratulations, thank you ever so much... I was very happy with all the poems entered in my TREE contest :-). Please enjoy my blog, I sure did... LOL--- always~ Linda

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Brittney, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 4:38:00 AM
    - Hello Brittney - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Awesome Awesome Awesome, have a said enough? Love peace light and all that brings in the power of your soul xxx

    lopez Avatar brittney lopez
    Date: 7/5/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much, thats what i was trying to achieve