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Below is the poem entitled THROUGH THE WINDOW which was written by poet Vee Bdosa. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When we are touching through the window where I see you
it's just emotion, but such emotion!
you look into tomorrow where you think you're going
and maybe wonder about what I am not showing.

when I can feel you through the window and I know you
it's just emotion, but such emotion!
sometimes you see me through the window, and my crying
and if I said I didn't love you, I would be lying.

and when you reach me through the window, I know you know me
it's just emotion, but such emotion!
and I would give my life to have the right to show you
and I would give my life if time was right to know you.

but windows keep you far away although I see you
it's just emotion, but such emotion!
and so I say some prayers for you and your pursueing
and through your window this is what I will be doing.
© Ron Wilson aka the Doylestown Poet

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:15:00 PM
    A lovely poem, Ron. I read a lot of hope in this one, and the ending is pleasant as well. Into my favs it goes. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Very outstanding

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:54:00 AM
    veebdosa Just love this....David