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Through My Eyes

I look upon a dam today That nature didn't build The water wasn't gentle As the rocks will soon reveal The danger it is producing From rain and melted snow Has caused problems to others Where the river flows below The rocks that surround the dam Have for centuries stood And gave into the urgings Of Mother Natures mood Cracked and crumbling They do a danger pose But the man made bridge below it Allow the mystery to unfold Their colors and their shapes and size Were finally brought to light As the waters and the wind Pushed the dirt aside Some of them are red Some of them are brown Some of them are green with moss And some of them are tan Native foliage in cracks are found Purple lupin and yellow clover abound Blue sage brush and mountain dandelions too Give new life to this awesone view And as we leave this scene of scenes The mountain walls do grow Some rounded intermingling humps The sharp ones behind could have snow I look upon the huge red wall Its remindes me of red clay The kind I used to play in Which are now three states away The white rocks on top this wall Near match the clouds above Each rock is different and like the clouds Change at natures touch But half way down the red wall White and blacks stripes come into play And there on the ground below Pieces of the stripes do lay The grassy mountains lucious green Beckon cattle near But the forests here are all dead trees From a fire just last year Mear words can not discribe What I really see No matter how hard I try It's a small bit of heaven to me Cile Beer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/9/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cile. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 3:10:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:50:00 PM
Congrats Marycile on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all ..with luv..
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Date: 6/22/2010 9:34:00 PM
Wow Cile, I enjoy the images you conjure up with your words.. Its like you take the reader to that specific place. Bless you Wilma
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Date: 6/22/2010 11:17:00 AM
Terrffic girl!!!!What an exceptional poem. I truly enjoyed. Words can not say all that I wish I can say to express what a great poem you wrote. Keep up the great work, and Thank you for stopping by with nice words of encouragment today. Be Bless....Patricia
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:11:00 PM
Interesting panoramic poem, very well illustrated with your words, Mary Cecile. I am very glad to meet you too. Thank you for your kind comments on my featured poem. Caroline
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:10:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive write that you have penned in this one..It was almost like being there..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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