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Through Her Fingers

Her strong demeanor Is present in her great stare Strands of flowing hair Flowing straight through her fingers Playing in powerful wind
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/11/2012 6:16:00 AM
For some reason this tanka reminds me of Pocahontas. Enjoyed the imagery much, Russ. :) thanks for the Soup Mail...I will be getting back with u on that. gwendolen :)
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:32:00 PM
beautiful write, my friend - excellent choice of words here
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Date: 11/9/2012 4:54:00 PM
Very very good my friend... your talent sours high my poet friend... thanks for the supporting comments as always.. Michael
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Date: 11/9/2012 1:27:00 PM
enchanting portrayal of her...i like the way you use 'floating' here twice; it lends more accent to the piece... impeccable kind of read, my friend; i feel like drifting in the wind!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/8/2012 11:48:00 PM
she sounds strong and lovely!
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Date: 11/8/2012 7:12:00 PM
Beautifully penned picture of her in this tanka Russell!Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 11/8/2012 6:59:00 PM
I wonder what she is looking at, or should that be who? Has that flick of mystery that nibbles at my mind and I'd love to solve the mystery. A real nice one to enjoy Rusty! :)
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