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Three Words For You

My paper is lost in the wind.. Only three words stayed to begin.. The air of lost souls spins my thoughts.. Over valleys of confusion where I wasn't taught.. The words clench on with dear life.. Carving there way in like strokes of a knife.. A destination that has lost its way.. Like folded paper placed in a tray.. Till it reaches the eyes it's meant to feed.. Only then will these three words drip and bleed.. And you will see your everything I do.. Just because, I Love You

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Lillie Williams

Date: 11/15/2012 6:50:00 AM

Love is powerful, it hides a multitude of faults. It seems that there is no wrong when love is involved. Nice reading. Keep up the good work Michael!

Bethany St John

Date: 10/19/2012 7:13:00 PM

Beautifully written Michael. Sweet and romantic.

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/16/2012 2:21:00 PM

You are a very prolific writer. This one touches us.

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/16/2012 12:03:00 AM

Hi Michael, enjoying very much, your outstanding poetry......this poem is so wonderful 'Till it reaches the eyes it's meant to feed' wow...very nice indeed - Shaz

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/11/2012 9:29:00 PM

This is one very romantic poem, for a very lucky lady. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/24/2012 10:16:00 AM

how sweet and romantic :) btw, are we having a bandana contest on facebook? I saw yours with the red and then yasmin's. I want in, lol :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2012 10:13:00 AM

a fervent write with a perfect ending .. those three words never go out of style Michael luv .. superb imagery enfolds the mind .. JG so luvs this one of yours .. xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2012 7:59:00 PM

SO romantic, Michael. Keep those sweet thoughts flowing.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2012 6:05:00 PM

Wow, Michael, I am ever so impressed every time I read a poem by you, and this one didn't disappoint me! This is a tremendous write, words that bleed to every couple, where that love never ceases! What a tender and kindhearted poem you have written my friend! I love this piece, Great work!!