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Three Different Lives

Empty clouds hung over head. Filled up with all that's left for dead. The door bell rang to go outside. Reminding me, the things not tried. The picture came in shades of new. Filled my heart with all that's true. A future with such hopes and dreams. Beautiful, yet not all it seems. You, me and ours, among the stars. A marriage on earth of Venus and Mars. Yet, someone's calling from beyond. To change the galaxy with their wand. Time changed in this cosmic dream. Mars got lost on a moon beam. And Venus hides behind the sun. Awaits tomorrow, when they'll be one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/7/2013 4:47:00 PM
I hope your future of hopes and dreams are still coming true
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Date: 2/6/2013 6:50:00 PM
Hello Robert, wow.... love the line.. time changed in this cosmic dream"" love all 3 lives..always~ Linda
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Date: 2/6/2013 12:13:00 AM
hey come on, it's been a month now. YOu gotta put up a new poem for me to respond to!! by the way I loved your comments to me. Did you see the poem someone was inspired to write because of your comments to them. It was very nice one but I can't remember who the poet woman was right now.
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Date: 2/5/2013 10:04:00 AM
this is amazing poetry robert,,,
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Date: 2/5/2013 12:30:00 AM
Great write!
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Date: 1/28/2013 9:06:00 PM
You sure can weave a sweet dream; you've got that night sky glowing with the goddess of beauty and the god of war creating a wonder of sweet magic. How I love that last verse, clever and oh so enigmatic! Love, Lizzy
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Date: 1/24/2013 4:36:00 PM
Hey I really enjoyed your queery query. Would you mind if I added it to my list? or maybe I better just stick to what's already there. haha. Really though, that was great: gay question!!!
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Date: 1/22/2013 10:57:00 PM
thanks for your recent beautifully rhymed comments, my friend.
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Date: 1/21/2013 9:08:00 PM
Helo my great poet Robert...very impressive write..i enjoy read this morning.. thank you for sharing your brilliant thought <3
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Date: 1/17/2013 6:28:00 PM
Time to post something new !!! Here is the comment he posted that I wanted you to post as a poem..as is or added too. “So many times we lose the fight to capture thoughts that we don't write. Dawning dreams of magic dust We breathe it in, it turns to rust. An avalanche of slumber snow. Covers up what we no longer know.”…. by: Robert Johnson in a comment
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/17/2013 6:30:00 PM
I think it is good as it...you leave so many cute little poems on the soup members poems. As one souper to another souper...thank you !!
Date: 1/16/2013 2:57:00 PM
Just coming here to say hello, Robert!
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Date: 1/16/2013 2:51:00 PM
Soup mail back...and I want to see it on your page lickidy split !!! It's about your comment under my "Visions Sight" Go now !!!!
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Date: 1/13/2013 2:35:00 PM
lovely write, my friend
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Date: 1/9/2013 10:06:00 PM
robert, I see you inspired a dreamy poem from a poetess here. I think it was Debra S!
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/17/2013 6:25:00 PM
Andrea...he posts those comment with rhyme and sometimes he needs to just post them on his page as a poem !!! But indeed I did take a comment of his, change it very little and added to it... He is a talented poet and wish he'd post more often..though he is limited by his time on computer.
Date: 1/8/2013 7:54:00 PM
dreamy, lovely but so sad, Robert. I really like how you crafted this one.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 1/9/2013 3:35:00 PM
Thanks!:)
Date: 1/8/2013 1:40:00 PM
This is quite lovely !! To dream of love...what more can we do? lol May Venus and Mars find their way back together !! Tomorrows are always possible !!
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