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Threads of Sand

Small grains of sand come trickling down Eluding all my reason's understanding Flyspeck granule , all demanding Time worn thoughts of days unwinding Hourglass, my dark companion Reminds me of the timeless questions I watch sand fall and feel so small A meager doll, that's all I am One by one...how can it be each speck will tick my life away? I watch them flow.......they slowly slip right through my hand and fingertips... Each glimpse, so brief before they fall Each grain is gone from yesterday And fleet as rain, that comes today I turn you up, around you go Watching sand, is life rewound Behind the glass the days decline Like spindled thread, the time unwinds Sand dwindles from my life...I see The spindle turn, what's left of me Will swirl and twirl, and drift away To weave with threads of history __________________________________________________________________ Inspired by Jeremy Martin's Contest: "Objectify Me" Hourglass/Doll/Spindle

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Date: 3/3/2013 3:26:00 PM
This one is a very deep expressive work..I enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Everyone has some dross within no matter how excellent of character they are..Sara
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Date: 3/3/2013 7:54:00 AM
Carrie a brilliant piece of work and a very intriguing title, well done...David
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Date: 3/2/2013 11:17:00 PM
I can see you haven't lost your creative touch. Best of luck in the contest :) -R
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Date: 3/2/2013 5:10:00 PM
Wow Carrie this is a great tale weaved for the contest. It sounds like a winner. It flowed so well also. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/2/2013 9:16:00 AM
An excellent poem from you !Great entry to the contest.Love this Carrie.
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