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Thoughts On Ascension Day

Spring has grown old on the brink of summer 
the swallows having arrived in time have finished 
restoring their nests now jump up past my window
to their home above right under the roof they love 
dashing down for speeding on dancing and yelling
shooing off the clouds to make way for the sun

young once again is the world and the Green is new 
lush devoid of the dust that will have gathered when 
nights will be growing like the main fruit of summer
and eventually colorless blossoms will open and bless
the world with the magic of White lulling nature to sleep
till the time when light grows and starts a new Spring

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  1. Date: 10/6/2009 12:27:00 PM
    Ingrid, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 11:25:00 AM
    Ingrid, I just wanted to drop by and add---Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:00:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 11:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 10:49:00 AM
    Congrats Ingrid on your poem being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 6:01:00 PM
    Ingrid - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 1:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poetry and more power. Ernilando

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 2:24:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Way to go! Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 2:22:00 PM
    Good write!

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 2:18:00 AM
    congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 5/24/2009 2:21:00 PM
    Splendid work indeed! Captured my image! Jeremia

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 6:54:00 PM
    Wonderful analogy of the process of spring very refreshing write indeed! Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 12:35:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 8:34:00 AM
    Very imaginative and fresh, the imagery is right for the progress of spring ... I can feel the freshness and the talent behind the perfect flow of this poem. Love always