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Thoughts of You

You occupy my mind two souls now intertwine connections undefined A once weary existence altered through persistence Written in the stars through all time and space you occupy my mind in this hidden place Destiny attained through mystic fires of flame Fires burn deep you occupy my mind even in my sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 4:27:00 PM
I know what you mean...the kicker to all this heartache that makes us feel alive. Is they don't see the beauty with in us and how they inspire and bring out the beutiful qualities in us to be able to write things about them so poetically. will they ever know? keep writing and sharing! kim*
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/31/2012 11:38:00 PM
Those undeserving may never know but one day, the right person will. I can no longer occupy my time with people who are undeserving. I might be losing the opportunity of finding my true destiny.
Date: 10/30/2012 1:54:00 AM
very touching,, heartfelt write...thanks for sharing Deeana...enjoyed!!! SK <3<3
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