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Thoughts In My Head

My body is no longer beautiful I tortured it for way to long I'm surprised it hasn't started a riot or went into a coma Living life to the fullest is what everyone should think of doing Don't waste your time with all the bull just cut it to the chase Cause suicide is never the answer it doesn't make anything any easier So instead of blowing your brains out or jumping off the Brooklyn bridge Think of all the good times you had and all that are to come I'm not just writing this poem for myself I'm writing it for all The people they call depressed or insane And any othe person who takes the time to read

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/25/2009 9:30:00 AM
The third line is great, sad and so true, a lot of people think of a permanent solution for a temporary problem, nice work...Raul
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Date: 11/25/2009 4:42:00 AM
Such fasinating writing I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and heart with us today Anna. I wish you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. May your writings inspire others to write from their hearts as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2009 12:51:00 PM
Good idea to think on the good times. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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