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Below is the poem entitled THOUGHTS which was written by poet Hazel Connelly. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Majestic colours
Line the room
Red, Orange Gold.

Champagne bottles
All popped their corks
Stand tall on shelves.

Mirrors, Mirrors
Fretwork frames
Everywhere reflecting
Orange lighting.

Tallow hanging
Like pearl dropplets.

Arched doorway
Draped in red velvet
Tied back with
Gold sashes.

Pictures, pictures
Hang all around
Past and present
Black and white.

Busy, Busy,
Mind racing
Will I write?
I think not...

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 3:03:00 PM
    Enjoyed following you around, illustrated well, especially liked "fretwork frames", John. To write or not to write, that is, or is that the question:-)

    Connelly Avatar Hazel Connelly
    Date: 10/15/2012 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello John, I was sat in this room for about a hour with three lines to a totally different poem, so the, will I write? was a question to myself. The other poem is still waiting to be finished. :-)
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:53:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..You could say that it is free verse..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Connelly Avatar Hazel Connelly
    Date: 10/15/2012 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara, I thought it may be but wasn't sure. :-)