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February 10, 2010

Trying to stop the swirling of my thoughts
My brain is a bullet train, pushing forward
No destination, just gotta go, gotta go, gotta go
I am trying to solve all of life’s problems in 
One random, crazy, mad, desperate dash
Insanity beats down my door and I ignore it
Thinking I will outrun it if I just keep going
I’ll be safe, just gotta run, gotta run, gotta run

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  1. Date: 3/10/2010 2:21:00 PM
    This is a great write and i know we all feel like this more than less often, i loved this and it was very relatable good work. Jo

  1. Date: 3/6/2010 7:38:00 AM
    Yes in science they call this the "monkey mind" always chattering away! I think most creative folk & most folks have to deal with this daily...nice write Light & Love & welcome to soup!

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 10:17:00 AM
    Sounds like my everyday life. Have you been spying on me!! It's true though, keep going and you'll never end up mad!! lol. It's good to know i'm not the only one who has my thoughts. Graet write Tricia. Gareth

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 7:18:00 PM
    Such is life with all the hustle and bustle.. but we can never accomplish it all without taking a breath.. a good straightforward write tonight.. enjoyed and thankxx for your comments on my poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 11:53:00 AM
    I know how you feel. I really enjoyed reading your poetry. You use a lot a great imagery and fresh langauge. Very nice work! -Mike