Thoughts

February 10, 2010 Trying to stop the swirling of my thoughts My brain is a bullet train, pushing forward No destination, just gotta go, gotta go, gotta go I am trying to solve all of life’s problems in One random, crazy, mad, desperate dash Insanity beats down my door and I ignore it Thinking I will outrun it if I just keep going I’ll be safe, just gotta run, gotta run, gotta run

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Joanna Smith

Date: 3/10/2010 2:21:00 PM

This is a great write and i know we all feel like this more than less often, i loved this and it was very relatable good work. Jo

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2010 7:38:00 AM

Yes in science they call this the "monkey mind" always chattering away! I think most creative folk & most folks have to deal with this daily...nice write Light & Love & welcome to soup!

Gareth James

Date: 3/3/2010 10:17:00 AM

Sounds like my everyday life. Have you been spying on me!! It's true though, keep going and you'll never end up mad!! lol. It's good to know i'm not the only one who has my thoughts. Graet write Tricia. Gareth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 7:18:00 PM

Such is life with all the hustle and bustle.. but we can never accomplish it all without taking a breath.. a good straightforward write tonight.. enjoyed and thankxx for your comments on my poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Mike Butler

Date: 2/23/2010 11:53:00 AM

I know how you feel. I really enjoyed reading your poetry. You use a lot a great imagery and fresh langauge. Very nice work! -Mike