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Thought Trains

Startled awake to ideas of missions to be fulfilled urgently. Plans prickle in my veins. Eager, I jump, awakened. Mind runs fast trains, I can’t keep up. Looking down on this I see a dizzy whirlwind of colour and shapes. The trains will run until they burn out in fires aflame. We’re unsure where to place the blame. God oppresses reproach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2011 2:17:00 PM
After 20 yrs of working as a railroad opr, trains caught my eye. I have been retired from it all years, still I dream of dots and dashes, trains and railroad depots. THOUGHT TRAINS brings it all back to my mind, too. Nice work. Vee Bdosa
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