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Thought trains

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Thought trains

Startled awake to ideas
of missions to be fulfilled urgently.
Plans prickle in my veins.

Eager, I jump, awakened. Mind runs
fast trains, I can’t keep up.
Looking down on this I see a

dizzy whirlwind of colour and shapes.
The trains will run until they burn out in fires aflame.
We’re unsure where to place the blame. 

God oppresses reproach.

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  1. Date: 3/14/2011 2:17:00 PM
    After 20 yrs of working as a railroad opr, trains caught my eye. I have been retired from it all years, still I dream of dots and dashes, trains and railroad depots. THOUGHT TRAINS brings it all back to my mind, too. Nice work. Vee Bdosa