Though Buds Frazzle

though stray buds frazzle pricking spines of moon’s unrest… twined love endures all

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2012 5:48:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 9/3/2012 12:50:00 PM

Wow wonderful senryu here Nette.Love it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2012 10:04:00 AM

This is an awesome way to define REAL love, Nette. It shines.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/3/2012 6:02:00 AM

Nette, a wondrous write, all the best for the contest :) *hugs* Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2012 11:16:00 PM

grand definition Nette luv with a perfect visual beauty .. best success in contest ..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/2/2012 1:52:00 PM

evocative! Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/2/2012 1:02:00 PM

You speak the truth my good friend! How you entwine your words through love and the moon is truly wondrous Nette! I love this engrossing write! Great Work!!