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This is what happens when I write a poem pissed off

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This is what happens when I write a poem pissed off

Look deep and hard
Into my eyes.
What do you see?

Neither pain, nor demise.

The burning hatred
Like fire inside
Heats up the very beast tonight.

Play coy.
Pretend it's fake.

Show all.
This is just a game.

When the time comes,
You wont be laughing.

When the time comes,
You wont be smiling.

In the distance,
There will be a scream.
Not of joy,
But pain and suffering.

This little game
You tried to play.

It got tried, weak.

Now your worst fears are here.
Be prepared.

I am no angel.
I'm not a devil.

Play me as a fool,
I use you like a tool.

I'll watch you cry.
Hurt. Bleed inside.
Watch thepain shine through your 
very eyes.

Yes, in the end
I will be the one laughing.

Yes, in the end
I will be the one smiling.

While you risen so high, off your 
stubborness and pride.

I'll enjoy every second
When you fall
Weak as you lost it all.

Your game is up.
Enjoy this bringing of hell.
For.. It's my turn now.

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  1. Date: 2/23/2012 9:18:00 AM
    congrats Amber on a great first place win luv.. excellent ..

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 6:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest *Amber*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 2:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your top win.Enjoyed the read very much.

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:44:00 AM
    Amber great piece of work, congrats.but i wouldn't want to piss you off...David

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 11:10:00 PM
    Amber, Excellent work. I love poems that project the emotion, especially anger, out to the reader and you nailed it. Congrats on winning PD's contest.................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:16:00 PM
    Amber.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this entry Amber. It is an interesting write.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 12:28:00 PM
    What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Amber. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 9:22:00 PM
    So visceral... I can feel you seething in rage.