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This day

This day will never be the same
This drink will never dull the pain
These words will never right the wrongs
This pain will only make me strong

This night is lonely and so cold
This story is too over-told
These tears cannot cleanse the past
This love was never meant to last..

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  1. Date: 5/4/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Of all the breakup poems I have read this is very original and refreshing in that fact. You did it well and you said it well. Keep up the good work Roman.

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Hi Roman very touching words liked it have been there

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 3:14:00 PM
    This is so sad, Roman. Congrats on your HM. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 1:14:00 AM
    An emotional write.Enjoyed the read.Congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 6:11:00 PM
    Congrats, Roman. Sad, but excellent. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 10:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Roman. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 4:16:00 PM
    Love come and love goes my friend,very well written. And yes:the pain will make you strong. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Atkin Avatar Roman Atkin
    Date: 2/26/2012 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/23/2012 11:08:00 AM
    So sad Roman; hopefully that pain passed. But heart reaching still.

    Atkin Avatar Roman Atkin
    Date: 2/24/2012 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.