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THIRTY MINUTE HUG

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THIRTY MINUTE HUG

Up the stairs, You are there
All around your smell bathes the room
You and me really feel we care
In instant spark and warmth booms

Each minute counts important
Each running second we all warmth
Not anymore to make a nowhere haunt
Rather to go somewhere stay be adamant

I look stare direct to your eyes 
You do the same
You hold your hind apart
I did too and we fall to Hug

No words came to our lips
All we did is to swim in that hug
Hug.. hug.. hug so tight..
so tight wanting not to depart....

by: olive_eloi
4:01pm
01/07/2014
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  1. Date: 11/24/2014 11:22:00 AM
    30 minutes, now that's what I call a hug. I wish, hey ho! one day some day I'll be encapsulated in one. Love it Olive, James :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 6:12:00 PM
    Very beautiful poem my friend on romance. Your soup friend Michael

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 11:52:00 AM
    - A sweet and beautiful poem, Olive !! - Files good to read! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)