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Thirst For Roses

Thirst for Roses
A woman in rags with intelligent looks Rusticity seen all over looking for a job. The village sky was too small She wanted to soar high in a city sky. Lived in ten by ten room With her husband & two children. When the life gave a good start, Her husband was attacked by paralysis Lying in broken bed, numb as a wound Her salty tears deforming the tiles. Life’s funeral procession is on its way, Make the way Somebody’s existence is being robbed Make the way Let he be in peace with the Almighty Make the way
+++++ Date 9-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Another day in Paradise by Jenish

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Date: 1/31/2014 4:55:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is a deeply moving and emotional write. Heart strings are being tugged at reading these words. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Broken Hearted poem
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Date: 11/29/2013 8:42:00 PM
Excellent.........Congrats
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Date: 11/28/2013 8:13:00 PM
A nice win DR.................. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 11/28/2013 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Dr. Ram, and congrats on your win :), hug, Yanny
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:13:00 PM
sad write Ram but a powerful expression of life congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/26/2013 6:36:00 PM
a poignant piece that shows the sadness of everyday life for many....great write, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:47:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations... Enjoyed your inspired write from the Phil Collins theme “Another day in Paradise." take care.... LINDA
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations ! Another win .. You bring the reader right into the scene. I loved your poem as well you entered , did not need a name to know it was awesome ! I see what this contest man "The Undertaker " sees :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 4:03:00 PM
A very sad, but true story that I think most of us can relate to, to some extent. These circumstances are happening more often than we realize. A very moving poem! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 11/26/2013 10:09:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Dr Ram
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Date: 11/26/2013 8:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Dr.Ram. This absolutely a moving and vivid piece.
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:06:00 AM
congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/26/2013 2:55:00 AM
Congratulations. Thank you for the support extended.Always yours (: ) Jenish Soosai Anthony.
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Date: 11/11/2013 12:36:00 AM
A very sad tale..When the poor become sick..they become poorer..When the poor becones a widow and she has a family..Then its not only hard to make a living but one touches pain and lives miswry.Touched my heart!!
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Date: 11/10/2013 7:15:00 AM
I like the story you spoke and you present it with the actual situation and mode.Great work...
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:51:00 AM
a tragedy. She is left even worse off with the death of her husband and he is now at peace!
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:29:00 AM
Moving and oh so sad.
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:22:00 AM
a moving write Dr Ram....
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:39:00 AM
Sad work...It reminds me of my now deceased sister-in-law whose father was taken with what doctors then called creeping paralysis..There were five children at that time and the mother had to care for the children so my sister-in-law age 14 went to work in the mill..The mill let them continue to live in the house..Life was hard back then..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 4:10:00 AM
- A moving and well written poem - Always a pleasure to read your poems Dr.Ram - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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