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Things You Can't See

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Things You Can't See

How do you dry up all my tears? 
And take away all my fears? 
Tell me all of your secrets,
And I'll explain why you mean so much to me,

Explain to me what it's like having lights within your eyes,
And I'll tell you everything that you will need to know all about me,
Even though it may seem that I'm not all there at times,
You only have to have faith in the things you can't see within.

But please come back to feeling your senses,
Because I’ve learnt my lesson,
And I will now give you more time, more love and affection,
Cause baby if I ever saw you with another guy,
No doubt that this player is going to cry.

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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:22:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Aidan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 2:20:00 AM
    A lovely and moving written poem, like this a lot. - Thank you for sharing - oxox Anne-Lise :)