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Things go wrong

Love hurts and people change. Things go wrong and things get strange. But life goes on and you only life it once. Be strong cause things will get better over the months. I thought I was heartbroken, I thought you were my world. You fooled me though, made me think I was your only girl. But all along, you didnt care. Im not sure, your were even completely there. But now I've moved on, when I thought it was impossible. I had to be the bigger person in this breakup, I was responsible. I let it get to me, but I didnt let it ruin me completely. I didnt do anything about the hurt you caused me, I acted so sweetly. I let you walk all over me, I tried to ignore how you disrespected me. But when I ended things, the pain was easier to see.

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  1. Date: 5/16/2015 1:52:00 AM
    I love how u rhymed your feelings out so beautifully

    McFarland Avatar Kierstein McFarland
    Date: 7/10/2015 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much!
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:01:00 AM
    Its over so now pick up yourself, you still have a long road ahead, this is only a pit stop, many more to go till you reach, the place you can call home.