Thine Own Twilight

MY TWILIGHT
PT. 1

INTRO:
~Torn~
Mid of life’s clammy grasp
One~ cold but always there
The other~ warm at heart,
But can’t be bound

Pt. one: the un-boundable

~Forgotten~
Years have passed
Since last I seen your face
Your heart wanted purity
But you background lifestyle one that race
Led you to digrace…
…me

~Unhinged~
By our love, one you didn’t expect
You doused it out with water,
Before our fire could even spread
You couldn’t confront your hearts desire
Instead, left love shattered and dead

~Poisoned~
Loves pure blood
By escaping enticing bliss
Then you blind in your appearance
When you find out, I’m small and meek
longing to be my rock, when my heart fell incoherence

~What do you want from me?~

© Miranda Lambert
5/17/11 3:26pm
Stay tuned for part two:
The stone cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/6/2011 6:07:00 PM
please Randa feel free to e mail me at my personal e mail: petitepoetess@yahoo.com any time u want to talk luv.. I am here for her and for u and for all who need a listening ear and prayer.. blessings to u too..
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:06:00 PM
Randa.. Constance and I are the very best of friends for many years now.. although she lives in Canada and I in USA we communicate daily and enjoy each others poetic talent .. we speak on the phone monthly.. she is alone .. her sister does not live close to heer.. she is suffering from diabetes which affects eyesight and many other things.. please keep this between u and I .. she is a treasured friend .. wish we were closer to each other.. she has been to eye doctor but needs followup..lluv..
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:07:00 AM
Randa ..your writes take the reader to another realm of emotion and intensity with dramatic flare and overtones of intrigue.. fabulous piece.. thankxx so very much for my 3rd place in your great contest "Best Buds".. the boys remind me of my five sons when little.. enjoy those precious days..they grow up so very fast.. and that brotherly luv bond never disappears.. they are always there for each other ..and will be ..forever.. God bless u and your family my friend..luv..
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:18:00 PM
a very creative piece of fine poetry, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 5/17/2011 9:44:00 PM
am amazed with this piece Randa and anxiously awaiting the continuation my friend.. such emotional expression surround these lines.. .. luv the last line of question.. super..
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:43:00 PM
this is great nicely written, well said and just pure lovely. cory
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