Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

theres a way out

Isabel vicuna Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled theres a way out which was written by poet Isabel vicuna. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Isabel vicuna

Best Isabel Vicuna Poems

+ Fav Poet

theres a way out

Have i come to the end in the 
journey of life.
i no longer know wich way my path 
seems to go on.
could it mean that this is the end of 
my forgotten life.
All i see is darkness so i sit and wait 
for the end to come.
But as i close my eyes and the only 
one in my mind is God.
I hear a sweet voice in my hear 
telling me that there is a way out.
So i open my eyes and notice its still 
dark all around.
i close my eyes again and let the 
sweet voice be my guide.
Ill be walking with my eyes close 
until the sun light comes.
For with the light comes my second 
chance in life.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:54:00 AM
    Wow! A second chance at life. I love this Isabel. It is soothing and so uplifting. Very good job!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 10:53:00 AM
    A really well written poem Manon, but a bit sad. - Welcome to P-Soup - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 9:56:00 AM
    wonderful piece.. welcome and hugs to your joining the Soup.. Michael

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 6:01:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Isabel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol