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There is nothing left

You know that feeling when 
someone tells you something 
and a pound of bricks get 
stored on your shoulders like a 
pounding in your heart, its not 
the best feeling in the world 
and I just don't know how to 
react to it should I say nothing 
and lie agreeing or speak up.
But I'm weak I'm chasing the 
sun with my eyes no words left 
tired and weak, there's no 
devotion, am I waisting my 
time am I making a mistake. 
There's nothing to do but chase 
the sun with my eyes slow an 
sad with bricks and poundings.
    There is nothing left.

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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 8:33:00 AM
    nice one, interesting write

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Very sad feelings but I know them well, I enjoyed reading your wonderful words! Laura :0)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:00:00 PM
    I understand this feeling. This was very strong, despite the pain. Well done!