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Their Voice Sep 9 2010

Falling further into the darkness, I am loosing all control. The pain sets in and I can't breath, they have taken over my soul. Locked away from all reality, surrounded by the shadows on the wall. Spacing off, trying to figure it out, I hear footsteps down the hall. The footsteps suddenly stop at my door, and the shadows disappear. A man walks in with a disturbing tone, but their voices I can still hear. With nowhere to run, I stand my ground, come and get me if you dare. A quiet little chuckle and a smile on my face, just to show you I don't care. There is nothing left to take from me, I gave it all away. Just turn around and close the door, I have nothing left to say.

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Date: 11/7/2010 11:43:00 AM
Nice rhyme and meter in this poem, Priscilla. Most have been where you're at. Keep on keeping on.
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