Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

The Young Girl At My School

Tay M Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Young Girl At My School which was written by poet Tay M. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Tay M

Best Tay M Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Young Girl At My School

There is a young girl at my school,
But when she tries to act cool,
She gets into trouble,
And there on the double,
Suddenly, she became the fool.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/19/2011 6:13:00 AM
    nice limerick. well done, Tay.

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 8:36:00 PM
    Good limericking!!!

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 8:31:00 PM
    Nice idea for a limerick. As far as syllables go, your last line has to be longer than your third and fourth lines, and about the same length as your first and second. How about adding two more syllables to your last line by changing it to "Suddenly, she becomes the fool"? Just a suggestion. There are many other ways to rewrite that line.