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The Write of You

Inspired by the write of you creamed through a paper sieve to cup with both hands the leavings that you trail the write of you like the chewed edge of hand pressed paper like the apostrophe of lash on the cheeky page I ogle the syncopated semen-antic drop of the write of you how often does the wonder of you flash across the film of my eyes unable reach for I am so enchanted with the coffee-au-lait write of you

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Date: 3/23/2013 9:20:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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Date: 1/17/2013 9:41:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY ADORE this one...and know exactly how you felt in the writing of it...the thrill of the great write the whispers of a soul that just somehow knows where you live in everything they ever pen...romance inked
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Date: 11/24/2012 2:26:00 PM
This is a very creative write Debbie with great depth, love it, blessings Carl
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Date: 11/23/2012 8:00:00 AM
this is so classical Debbie, just so nice to know you and your wonderful poetry...
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Date: 11/23/2012 8:01:00 AM
and i grew believing that intellect had no heart, boy was i wrong
Date: 11/23/2012 7:13:00 AM
this is really good! One of the best I've read on the soup. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 11/22/2012 10:31:00 PM
Yes, great poem here Deb...
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Date: 11/22/2012 5:34:00 PM
Very expressive work honoring Mr. O..I am sure that he will be pleased..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 11/22/2012 9:41:00 AM
I'm sure he will feel honoured by dedication, Debs! Sweet, sultry and sexy imagey. Will have to read his "Montage on White". Hope you will have a super Thanksgiving.:)) Love, Mikki
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Date: 11/22/2012 8:40:00 AM
Quite a honour for Mr O here Debbie, Also wishing you a very happy Thanksgiving..I think its a great Instution for you to cherish.."
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Date: 11/22/2012 8:09:00 AM
I love anything that smacks of sex, writing and film (photography) all in one little happy poem): Interesting, lovely, strange, weird, uplifting "Write." And Happy Happy Gobble Day:)
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Date: 11/22/2012 6:58:00 AM
Hey Debbie, I enjoyed taking time of work and reading this gem! Happy Thanksgiving to you :)
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Date: 11/22/2012 6:32:00 AM
Nice one Debbie you are quite cool aren't you xx
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Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 AM
While reading your amazing write I could not resist checking the beautiful Poem of Ruben O. Thank you for both these wonderful writes and Thank you for all your wonderful comments on my Poems. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..D. Guzzi
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Date: 11/21/2012 7:07:00 PM
Beautiful write of you Debbie, this is really inspiring :) - hug, yanny
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Date: 11/21/2012 7:03:00 PM
An amazing write - a beautiful expression and imagery. I am impressed by your poem Debbie -Mohammad
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Date: 11/21/2012 5:19:00 PM
Such inspired word usage. telling a happening,yet also,inciting doubt as to the act. Excellent!
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Date: 11/21/2012 3:39:00 PM
Beautiful and awe inspiring write here Debbie! I sure enjoyed reading this poem this evening! What a delightful piece, I hope you have a great thanksgiving my friend, Great Work!!
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