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The Write of You

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The Write of You

Inspired by the write of you
creamed through a paper sieve to cup
with both hands the leavings that you trail
 the write of you

like the chewed edge of hand pressed paper
like the apostrophe of lash on the cheeky page
I ogle the syncopated semen-antic drop of
 the write of you

how often does the wonder of you flash
across the film of my eyes unable reach
for I am so enchanted with the coffee-au-lait
 write of you

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:20:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:41:00 AM
    ABSOLUTELY ADORE this one...and know exactly how you felt in the writing of it...the thrill of the great write the whispers of a soul that just somehow knows where you live in everything they ever pen...romance inked

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 2:26:00 PM
    This is a very creative write Debbie with great depth, love it, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:00:00 AM
    this is so classical Debbie, just so nice to know you and your wonderful poetry...

    horsman Avatar harry horsman
    Date: 11/23/2012 8:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and i grew believing that intellect had no heart, boy was i wrong
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:13:00 AM
    this is really good! One of the best I've read on the soup. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 10:31:00 PM
    Yes, great poem here Deb...

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:34:00 PM
    Very expressive work honoring Mr. O..I am sure that he will be pleased..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 9:41:00 AM
    I'm sure he will feel honoured by dedication, Debs! Sweet, sultry and sexy imagey. Will have to read his "Montage on White". Hope you will have a super Thanksgiving.:)) Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:40:00 AM
    Quite a honour for Mr O here Debbie, Also wishing you a very happy Thanksgiving..I think its a great Instution for you to cherish.."

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:09:00 AM
    I love anything that smacks of sex, writing and film (photography) all in one little happy poem): Interesting, lovely, strange, weird, uplifting "Write." And Happy Happy Gobble Day:)

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Hey Debbie, I enjoyed taking time of work and reading this gem! Happy Thanksgiving to you :)

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Nice one Debbie you are quite cool aren't you xx

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 AM
    While reading your amazing write I could not resist checking the beautiful Poem of Ruben O. Thank you for both these wonderful writes and Thank you for all your wonderful comments on my Poems. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..D. Guzzi

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:07:00 PM
    Beautiful write of you Debbie, this is really inspiring :) - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:03:00 PM
    An amazing write - a beautiful expression and imagery. I am impressed by your poem Debbie -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:19:00 PM
    Such inspired word usage. telling a happening,yet also,inciting doubt as to the act. Excellent!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:11:00 PM
    Oh, Deb... Mr. O is sure to be blushing. Awesome write. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:39:00 PM
    Beautiful and awe inspiring write here Debbie! I sure enjoyed reading this poem this evening! What a delightful piece, I hope you have a great thanksgiving my friend, Great Work!!