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The worst morning after

The one time when I tried Southern Comfort
Was in a drinking game or something of the sort
I remember my right eye wouldn't open
My temples were pounding like a drum 

All I could see was red
So I reached for my head
Then I realized I had no hair
Reeling, I crawled for the mirror

When I found the bathroom, I grabbed the sink 
I pulled myself up to see letters in black ink
My forehead was throbbing so bad
I focused to read what it said 

I'm pretty sure I screamed something out loud 

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 10:21:00 AM
    great. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:48:00 AM
    I see you won. YES!!! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:17:00 AM
    Hahaha. I knew you'd win the contest with this gem. Congratulations, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:50:00 AM
    This is fantastic! I enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:26:00 AM
    nights of youth lol super poem congrats on win Shadow smiles

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 11:03:00 PM
    Congrats... :-) SKAT

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 9:58:00 PM
    You rock Mitch,, congratulations in Susan's "Worst Morning After..." contest. take care. xox~ LINDA ....

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 5:52:00 AM
    ah i stumbled across the competetion! nice one Mitch and good luck

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:11:00 AM
    haha, I've heard about this kind of thing. ARe you just imagining or did this happen to you?

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Nice poem , best of luck for the contest. *smiles* Ron

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:19:00 AM
    A nice humorous poem. Good story for all those who would like to know what the after effect of having too much to drink is.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Hahaha, you drunken sod, you!!! You must have felt like you'd been in a train crash. NIce one, MItch. If this is for the competition, good luck to you, my friend. PS - I think you'd enjoy my "On the rocks". Cheers, pal. Licia :-)