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The Wind That Moves You

i admire the muscle of the wind that brought you to my door. i marvel at its infinite glory as it moves my land and shore, and drives the hearts desire towards the fire that burns for you. i am the keeper of such a flame; the wind that moves you tames me- i am lion, please take my roar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/31/2011 3:39:00 AM
Stunning imagery John, love it..
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Date: 1/20/2011 6:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning John. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 10:52:00 PM
creatively expressed, i like poems that shows one had a deep thought. to say someone was driven by a wind towards your door is a great concept, its poetic and thats what poetry is. superb!!!
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Date: 1/19/2011 9:23:00 PM
This is very different. I really like it!
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:36:00 PM
Nice romantic write. very good poetry....Michael
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