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The Wind

Wind, under the influence of parallel time heeds my thoughts with more than mere convenience Assuming ripple-effect, machinations in my mind travel centuries, backwards and forward, mapping evolution, my evolution, avoiding inevitable extinction Sometimes gently, other times galloping in flames, wind renews tides and tumbles with the sun Carries the sweet call of the Loon to my thirsty soul and howls in madness when I'm afraid Beneath the day I have not seen the wind knows why I came this way 08/04/13 © All Rights Reserved

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Donna Jones

Date: 8/12/2013 7:45:00 PM

Really beautiful Jimbo ....enjoyed the scene

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 8/10/2013 11:05:00 AM

Expresses a subjective, personal point of view. First-person point of view expresses the writer's personal feelings and experiences directly to the reader using these pronouns: I, me, my, mine; we, our, us. The first person creates a sense of intimacy between the reader and writer because it expresses a subjective point of view. Thanx for the brilliant title of your poem. The Wind is a 1928 American dramatic silent film directed by Victor Sjöström. Thnx again for ur kind visit.

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/9/2013 11:08:00 AM

Hi jimbo,,,I can relate to these words,, especially carries the sweet call of loon to my, thirsty soul & howls in madness when im afraid...love that stanza so true!!! Excellent write, I like how your mind works:0) cherie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2013 10:24:00 AM

this rolls off the tongue like sweet tides of cyles... much enjoyed, jimbo... hope to hear you again on the radio!..:) huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2013 7:49:00 AM

I have only seen a Loon on TV or in a movie..They have such a beautiful call and are a lovely bird..Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Got to go prepare lunch..Read my work "Half A Heart"..Sara

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/5/2013 9:12:00 AM

A new piece from Jimbo!!! YES!!! A reason for everything in our lives. They don't call it the "Winds of Change" for nothing. Awesome job!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/5/2013 5:10:00 AM

Wind renews tides and tumbles with the sun-I love this line alot and the message in the ending of the poem 'beneath the day i have not seen /the wind knows why/i came this way'..lets move where the wind blows Jimbo.Lovely poem and its mt pleasure hearing you on drake's show : )