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the weathervane

a weathervane still
points east 'pon gray ancient barn...
fall's air rust tractors

the vain weathervane speaks east
and rust grows though no one knows

rusty John Deere sits
outside engine deep in grass...
bucks face off for fight

the leaves are falling
revealing the trees fractures
fall air thrust factors

crimson, gold, and red leaves fall
farm lake ~ mural of the scene

John Deere the artist
tractors in the grass like clouds
wearing the weather

Collaboration between John Loving III and Sara Kendrick
Sara's 1, 3, 5
John Loving III...2, 4, 6 

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  1. Date: 12/19/2013 8:08:00 AM
    Great collaborative work... Terry

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:05:00 PM
    You two collaborated beautiful... The imagery I've seen in the country from times past... Memories... Ahhh...

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:54:00 PM
    I've just added an extra slot for you

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:50:00 PM
    this is an excellent collab from you both; I like everything about it: the mood, the tone, the colours, that last line especially - "like clouds/wearing the weather" - how did you come up with that?