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The Very First Time

By: Miranda Lambert For: Michael Falotico’s contest “Eyes First Meet” Simple as a glance Turns two stares entwined Distant, unknown, yet conjoined Seduced by my eyes Your temptation begins to sting Denial no longer and option End with a burning kiss Indulging fever from our lips Caressing that love into today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/5/2011 9:07:00 AM
steamingly beautiful , randa.. all the best to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/31/2011 11:55:00 PM
and it all started with a simple gaze. Love that carressing love into today line!!
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Date: 3/31/2011 1:54:00 PM
Lovely write with passionate feelings of love, Miranda
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Date: 3/31/2011 12:45:00 PM
Compelling and passionate description of love at first sight, Randa. Really liked the way you described the feelings as "distant, unknown, yet conjoined." Excellent writing! Wishing you success in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2011 12:42:00 PM
very well penned...going to my favs
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