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The very first time

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The very first time

By: Miranda Lambert
For: Michael Falotico’s contest “Eyes First Meet”

Simple as a glance
Turns two stares entwined
Distant, unknown, yet conjoined

Seduced by my eyes
Your temptation begins to sting
Denial no longer and option

End with a burning kiss
Indulging fever from our lips
Caressing that love into today

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  1. Date: 4/5/2011 9:07:00 AM
    steamingly beautiful , randa.. all the best to you! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 11:55:00 PM
    and it all started with a simple gaze. Love that carressing love into today line!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 1:54:00 PM
    Lovely write with passionate feelings of love, Miranda

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 12:45:00 PM
    Compelling and passionate description of love at first sight, Randa. Really liked the way you described the feelings as "distant, unknown, yet conjoined." Excellent writing! Wishing you success in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 12:42:00 PM
    very well penned...going to my favs