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The Vanishing

Since summer lost to fall Winters got a grip One solitary spark, now a firestorm Cars lined up like smog filled rats With terror filled eyes Blinking lights as if hazards signaled Sympathy I saw the green turn to amber Never slowed down Never looked around Drones are closing quick now Hazy nights in my head Shades of red wishing green The warm sway in my mind as I walk Through the pine forest Sweet scented needles with every carpeted step The soothing "tic tic" of red headed woodpeckers The warm mist off lake superior, baptizing The doe and her fawn As they lift their heads when I walk by Joining me in prayer 01/13/13 © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/10/2013 11:42:00 AM
I love the depth of your writings!! Layers. You are truly gifted. Can't wait to read more. :) Huggs deb
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:20:00 PM
I like those "hazy nights" in my head also. Seems this Michigan winter is, cold-wise a little more severe than usual. Your visions are beautifully expressed. Congrats on this fine poem being selected. daver
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:29:00 PM
James, :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"
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Date: 2/3/2013 5:41:00 PM
This just sends you to a quiet peaceful place.... nice thanks
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Date: 1/30/2013 2:25:00 PM
Just a great way to get out of the rat race! A fetile mind can find repite anywhere; great verse Jimbo.
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Date: 1/19/2013 4:58:00 PM
Very creative, expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2013 7:03:00 PM
soon this cold weather will vanish to spring. i hope.
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Date: 1/14/2013 7:30:00 PM
Hi James; great write took me on a little journey :)
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:03:00 AM
this is very inspirational James, love it...
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Date: 1/14/2013 8:24:00 AM
A very interesting write my friend! Thought provoking... cheers, Jack
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