The Uss Indianapolis

It was in July of 1945 
  And the USS Indianapolis
Had a crew of nearly 12 hundred alive
  But a Japanese sub fired and did not miss
 
American sailors had completed their job
  Delivering parts for the first atomic bomb
Some sank with the ship, others in the sea did bob
  No food, few lifeboats, ocean deceptively calm

Surprise attack, no distress signal had been sent
  It was four days later those floating were spotted
The survival rate was just 25 percent
  With hundreds of sailors’ bodies the sea was dotted
 
In the movie “Jaws” as Captain Quint had related,
  “The sharks came cruisin'. So we formed into tight groups.”
Six men per hour were killed while for help they waited
  All were lost but 316 Navy troops

Some victims died of exposure or starvation
  But far more were killed by the sharks that had attacked
These men lost their lives in service to our nation
  But bomb parts delivered had a deadlier impact

One of the last ships that was sunk in World War II
  The Indianapolis had turned the war’s tide
With a mission carried out by a courageous crew
  Victory was soon celebrated by allies worldwide



This is an entry for the History Poems contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Diane in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Dazzle Us With History". Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Congrats, Diane. Outstanding account. Excellent write. Nice going. xxxRalph
Duffin Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:24 AM
Hi Congratulations on your achievement with this fine historical piece, Eamon
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 3:16 PM
Good reminder of a historical fact that makes one thankful for the men and women that still volunteer and defend our country..Congratulations..Sara
Fraser Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Diane, this was another poem that brought me back to my youth. The Navy was always for me when I was younger. I always loved boats. It was bad enough being bombed or torpedoed, but to then face the seas other predators, the sharks. It must have been horrifying. We will never comprehend being circled by natures beauties, then the inevitable in those blood spilled waters. Many congratualtions on your fine win in the History contest, well deserved....:)
Freeman Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations Diane, on your worthy success. Agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 10:53 AM
I enjoyed your poem..althoug the topic was very sad. thank you for reminding me of this ..congrats on your win. BG
Johnson Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 10:34 AM
This is another side of those terrible days which has not been often told. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 10:05 AM
Diane, Congratulations on your honorable mention with this outstanding poem. James and I judged separately assigning points to all 37 entries and the competition was incredible. Just tabulating the rankings took hours. Take pride in your accomplishment. Love, Carolyn
Beck Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Yes, I knew the story of the INDIANAPOLIS, and the terrible shark-end of many of the men....and there was also a movie with Stacey Keach ...did you see it?....you have described it poignantly and I hope you will be a winner ...it's a great poem....Syd
Milgate Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Picked a sad and heavy one, but well done. Good luck.
A   Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 4:54 PM
Hello, Diane.. I have missed the soup much these days.. Since its a big place with wonderful poets.. I enjoy seeing all my familiar poets friends name.. by the way.. I was watching the movie "JAWS" last night... . forced my x-fiance to watch it with me... I enjoyed reading the history you share with us here.. take care.. and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
Devonshire Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 4:38 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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