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The Unbolted Light

- Falling like snowflakes on webs of forgiveness spinning through clouds in the unbolted light searching so softly down dark Autumn pathways hoping to find our way in the night. Savoring rain on the bowers above us thunder still rolls 'round the cusp of the dawn out on the horizon we turn to remember the loved and the lost and the ones who go on. We were so sure we made the right choice but we were young and cares were so few those who would guide us have gone on before and left us wondering what to do God in his mercy has shown us the way as we pray to him each night once we understood it all seemed so simply Just follow his love, in the UNBOLTED LIGHT Written with my niece, Johnette Loefgren

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/24/2009 5:16:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 3/15/2009 4:59:00 AM
What an enjoyable reading this make, what a great pedestal of faith to share, love it!
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Date: 8/5/2008 11:03:00 AM
a very well versed piece of poetry, enjoyed reading it.
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