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The Ultimate Halloween Night

In a far away land in the pacific called home,
Group of teenagers are unaware of the doom,
We’re talking about the scary evil spirits,
Ghosts are everywhere and blood-sucking zombies.

People going inside can’t go out breathing and alive,
Witches doing their spells, it’s miracle if you can survive,
Who will help you in times of need?
If you are surrounded with bundles of talking weeds?

You have to run fast if you value your life,
Do you have sharp objects or even a knife?
Wolves with sharp fangs are ready to ravish you,
It’s an ultimate halloween night I told you so.

Just around the corners are spiders with venom,
Creepy sounds everywhere reminding you it’s full moon,
Vampires looking for victims to hypnotize,
So pray for your life if you are really wise.

September 27, 2013

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Excellent. Well done. Enjoyed your poem. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 3:21:00 PM
    wow, scary write!

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 11:00:00 AM
    paz, we do celebrate Hallow here and your bone-chilling piece makes me await this holiday with excited anticipation... will keep in touch when i go back to bkk soon.. :) hugggs

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 7:31:00 PM
    A great Halloween story enjoyed xxx

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Hi, my dearest friend Maria! Biggest hugs to you! Sorry for stopping by just now. So busy and out of bkk. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing Halloween poem again and your lovely visits/comments on my poem. Have a great day always! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 10:06:00 AM
    Well done Maria my friend.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:06:00 PM
    eerie and charming, paz.. you make Hallow a crazed experience!... well done!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 7:00:00 AM
    - Will wish you a beautiful weekend, Maria! - All the best to you my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:07:00 AM
    An excellent & highly creatively & imaginatively written creepy poem this is my dearest friend Maria. You did this poem extra-ordinarily well with words of wisdom at the end. So love and enjoy reading it tonight. A winner in my book. Good luck & best wishes always my very dear friend! love lots always, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 8:01:00 AM
    what a great Halloween poem...brought back childhood brother used to have one of those creepy, scary houses that kids all approached with caution! Enjoyed the read :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 11:02:00 PM
    This kind of night to enjoy only on the television as a movie!! I still remember the spook houses. They kind of scared me!!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 12:33:00 PM
    - Horror and ghosts .... dark, cold and windy night ..... buuuu...uuuu...uuu !! - Lock all doors and windows .... It's Halloween! - Very well written Maria, good luck in the contest! - Hope your weekend will be great! - All the best to you my friend! - oxox

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    Date: 9/28/2013 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot friend Anne :) Have a great Weekend ;)