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The Turn

Staggered aimlessly into some empty church, One rainy Wednesday afternoon; As I hung my head at the alter, I asked God to please end this misery soon.   I heard my words echo off the sanctuary walls, As if this place was abandoned long ago; But I waited patiently for an answer, To reach me here below.   It seemed I had waited a lifetime, But only a few hours really passed by; And I was still alone without an answer, So I just hung my head and cried.   I felt the tears roll off my cheek, Forming a puddle around my shoes; Maybe I really didn’t deserve to be here, But I had nothing left to lose.   Carl A Fraser Just then a single silvery moonbeam, Trickled through the stained glass up above; And as it radiated all around me, He spoke to me of his love.   He said he felt my pain and misery, And wept for me every day; He said he knew this day would come at last, when I would seek a better way.   So I laid the gun down beside me, And surrendered all my past; It’s the only thing I’ve ever done, That will forever last…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2012 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Standing At A Crossroad" contest Carl. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:43:00 AM
Good morning, Carl,,:-) Congratulations in Gails "Standing At A Crossroads " contest, deep meaning... always~ PD
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Date: 11/10/2012 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations Carl a well deserved win xx
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Date: 11/9/2012 8:42:00 PM
CONGRATS CARL ON A FABULOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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