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The Tree

                                        Some nut's old shells stay
                                 Some mistletoe still, squirrel's nest
                        The soul is now bare for all to see in its winter

In honor of Brian Strand

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  1. Date: 1/17/2012 6:42:00 PM
    Looks like a good example of a fibonacci poem. Those types are not easy to write.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:45:00 PM
    Howdy took a nice approach to this topic and a great form you choose too. Wonderful description of this tree in winter! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 11:58:00 AM
    I really liked how you ended this, Sara-- I think it is such an apt description for that tree---congrats on your win and sending you soupmail in a bit

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 1:06:00 PM
    How embarrassing and shivery. Hope your year is starting out well for you, Wilma. Congratulations on a fun poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 9:49:00 AM
    You paint a stark picture Sara. Well done and congratulations

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Show Me Again" contest Sara. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Are you lover of the Universe? I feel so, you are. Loved it, my friend. bl

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 12:00:00 AM
    Sara,,, love it... looks like Texas does not need to be winter.. in order for them trees here to be naked..... a very wonderful poem.. Thank you for sharing your awesome poem. Take care and have yourself a good night ;-) always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 8:17:00 PM
    The soul is now bare for all to see in its winter, words that give births to more words! well-penned and quite profound Sara. thank you for the visit

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 7:15:00 PM
    Well done Sara, love,vie

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 3:40:00 PM
    This is a great display of an awesome write! I'm not familiar with the Fibonacci form but I get the general idea from this poem! I like how your described the tree and its winter condition! Still having the remnants of Christmas through the mistletoe displaying this previous holiday! How bare it is during the winter months, perfect Sara! I love the poem, awesome work!!

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 3:14:00 PM
    Very nice form!! And perspective on how life passes by. Luv n hugs. Michael