The Transformation

Shed the clay that strives to be an anchor
Tarnishing, but for awhile, the dreams of man
Addled hopes can rise in the morning’s mist
Instead of languishing beneath despair
Replenished strength awakens the spirit
With a simple drink from the Milky Way
And flirtations with Perseus opens up
Yielding beauty in heaven’s realm
The grave that holds yet, a soul to Earth,
Owns the judgment of defeat
There is none, but one, that must decide
How to build on wishes made
Even when the faltering of darkness
Shadows well the light of faith
There is a spark that burns the night
As gravity shows force, to mark a trail
Rise! Rise, you fallen man!
Strive to be among the stars


-Virginia Mitchell

Contest- STAIRWAY TO THE STARS (Acrostic)
Sponsor- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/28/2012 5:09:00 PM
Yes well written Virginia,, and my congratulations on your spot in the contest today.)
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Virginia. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations Virginia.Beautiful Acrostic.Love it!
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:15:00 PM
Congrats Virginia on a sweet success for this remarkable entry luv.. thankxxx for supporting too.. luv..
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Date: 2/24/2012 10:39:00 PM
That is truly wonderful Virginia- and thank you for your kind words also, Bren : )
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Date: 2/21/2012 6:57:00 PM
wow, what a GREAT job you did with this challenge. I think you should make the letters stand out at the beginning of each line so everyone can see that you spelled Stairway to the Stars going down. The message of this one is outstanding.
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:05:00 PM
Yes, one surely must strive to reach higher..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like winners' cirlce work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara.
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:13:00 AM
Smile ˜ Oh I Surely shall be Amongst the stars * Putting a few of they in my pouch * Love, John!:) *
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:47:00 AM
Clever acrostic , Virginia , finishing with a positive command . Tks for the kind words ..
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:16:00 AM
Sorry I missed this lovely write so many transformative owrks here. Thanks so much for stopping by. Light & love
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Date: 2/21/2012 4:38:00 AM
This is a beauty Virginia and I absolutely love the theme you have chosen :) all the best for the contest :) Wilma
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