The Tin Man

They said he had no heart at all
They said he felt no pain
The stone-faced man just gave the facts
No feelings would he feign

He talked of floods and accidents
He spoke of deadly quakes
There were reports of surgeries
He spoke of bites from snakes

But then one day a war broke out
It was one of the worst
The man who was most seasoned
He would report it first

Day and night, the two sides fought
The massacre was brutal
Leaders said they saw no hope
They said the talks were futile

One night the man reported late
The sun was going down
The light was still enough to see
The story done in town

The bullets came from everywhere
Small fires raged around
The camera man had focused in
It seemed there was no sound

The little girl had stumbled out
She could have been his own
Her face had blood, her skin was torn
The building had been blown

The girl appeared as in a daze
But still their eyes did meet
Amidst the terror all around
She walked across the street

She seemed just like an angel
Her dress was burnt and torn
She held her hands out to the man
Her little face forlorn

Not more than thirty feet away
His eyes fixed on the girl’s
A bullet flew and she went down
The blood had drenched her curls

The man just stood in silence
Like time had stopped in space
The tin man’s heart had melted
And tears streamed down his face

They said he never was the same
the killing took a toll
They said that you could almost see
where bullets pierced his soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/2/2022 1:41:00 PM
Your poem although written in 2012 could be most appropriate for our world today . You have beautifully expressed the depth of sorrow and grave sadness that war inflicts on our souls . A beautiful write with outstanding imagery. Kudos, :) Paulette
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Date: 7/3/2022 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Paulette. I remember I wrote that because it was similar to a scene I had seen in a documentary. I cried as I wrote it. ?? Samia
Date: 5/24/2012 3:22:00 PM
War may be necessary in defense of one's country, but not as an act of aggression for the sake of oil or power. This is a well told horror story.
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Date: 5/24/2012 5:30:00 PM
I agree with you so much Vince. War to defend a country is one thing but it should not be for aggression and definitely not for oil or power. Thank you so much for your comment. :)
Date: 4/14/2012 3:31:00 PM
Wonderful, Samia... The sencelessness so vivid... I must read more of yours...Terry
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Date: 4/14/2012 3:42:00 PM
Hi Terry, Thank you very much. I really loved your poem. You must write more ...Samia
Date: 4/10/2012 4:45:00 AM
Thank YOU Rockman for your lovely comment. Yes, I guess it is a story for all times, unfortunately ...Samia
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:39:00 AM
A heart wrenching story. Not just of todays times but of all times. From the beginning of time. Will we ever learn that death and destrustion will never be the answer? So sad that freedom comes through the price of domination. Let's hope that freedom will always prevail. Great poem for much thought. Thanks Samia. Rockman :-)
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Date: 4/8/2012 1:46:00 PM
Hi Ilene, Thank you very much. I'm so glad you liked it!
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Date: 4/8/2012 1:06:00 PM
this is very well rhymed and has a beautiful flow. i enjoyed it very much!
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