The Throwing Fog

The grey clouds streak in front of the full moon Coolness of the moon lays upon the ground Looking straight up the night drifts dark too soon The grey clouds streak in front of the full moon And beauty lends directly to my swoon There’s a fog that throws itself all around The grey clouds streak in front of the full moon Coolness of the moon lays upon the ground
Russell Sivey Contest: "Triolet" Sponsor: Giorgio Veneto 8/4/2013

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Date: 9/1/2013 2:49:00 PM
Hello Russell, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 8/27/2013 12:18:00 PM
Creative winning Triolet..Enjoyed reading this work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2013 4:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/24/2013 5:38:00 PM
Hi Russell, loving the win... congrats...SKAT
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Date: 8/23/2013 6:44:00 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations. Love,Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2013 1:54:00 PM
a charming approach for the theme, russel.. you glow with the moon.. grrreat form, grreeat art!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:40:00 AM
This was moody, yet brilliant. Embracing the lunar skies, through the fogs of life. Great work!
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:51:00 AM
An excellent image in your outstanding poem my dear friend Russell. Kudos again! I don't have any idea about triolet form & your very beautiful poem/s is/are inspiring me so much to learn about it. Thank you so much for sharing, for your time to read my poem & everything. I've received a message just recently from someone & i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! Biggest sweet hugs! love lots, Leonora
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