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The Thing I Enjoyed

I remembered it most because of what happened, So expected and at the same time, I knew that what was would not for long. When I looked that window that fine sunny day, So I didn't expect it to be Coming up Oh - so suddenly. I realized I wasn't alone, he was standing their with me. The times I had with him I remember so fondly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/19/2012 11:49:00 AM
Helen.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Carol's contest.. Take care :-) ~PD
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Date: 11/17/2012 1:16:00 PM
I hope he is still with you?? Congrats on your win. I enjoyed this poem. How interesting the name you are using. In my hotmail, I am Wordwizard. I got it from an IQ test I took online!!
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Date: 11/17/2012 3:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Helen! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/16/2012 9:44:00 PM
CONGRATS HELEN ON A SUPERB WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 11/16/2012 12:17:00 PM
Well done, another contest that passed me by xx
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Date: 11/16/2012 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Helen. Thank you for supporting this contest and may you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2012 8:15:00 AM
A great write and very enjoyable read Helen. Love, Carol
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