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The Tear Drop Man

Spare a pittance for the Tear Drop Man
Who's hat is out so he 
Can tie his arm and shoot a bit
And dream the sweetest dreams

A sandwich curbs his appetite 
But a dollar would do more 
All those traumatic memories 
Would fade if he could score

Spare a pittance for the Tear Drop Man
Who's father rests in peace
The Tear Drop Man wouldn't idly watch
His mother get the beats 

A needle and a puddle
And a drop too much in him
A memory of his grandmas hand
That used to raise his chin

Spare a pittance for the Tear Drop Man
A flower where he lies 
To cover up his terror 
And the single tear he cried

By Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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  1. Date: 6/3/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Wow :) Brilliant indeed

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Kyle..this is awesome...could be a blue's song!!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:22:00 PM
    This piece is exceptional! I am moved by your words and the images you created. Very powerful Kyle.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Kyle, that's a good piece. l enjoyed reading it!