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The Swan

THE SWAN It’s unseasonably warm The sun is high And I’ve wandered down among the rushes Bare-legged, knobby kneed, warm mud oozing between my toes When she catches my eye as she slowly slides by This graceful swan No alarm shown, no ruffling of feathers, no hurry She continues on, close to the bank And, after a certain spell, is gone I gaze up into a cloudless sky – one gull gliding high And suddenly I am one – for but a moment – With some formless, sandy jelly Inched ashore from the hot primordial sea This sense scalds, travels the length of me And only a close reappearance of that lovely swan Brings me back to reality This poem was inspired by Andrea Dietrich's charming book, Prosies. If you haven't read it, I urge you to buy a copy = Shadow Poetry 1209 Milwaukee Street Excelsior Springs MO 64024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 2:39:00 PM
Wonderful images you have painted in this poem.
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:14:00 PM
Had me in the sand there with you Daver, this was a beauty; I am going to send you soup mail now..!
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Date: 7/9/2012 10:44:00 AM
This one's a beauty, Daver! Seeing the beauty and magnificence of these swans will cetainly leave one feeling blessed. A wonderful way to be brought "back to reality". I wonder what happened to my swans.:( I don't see them, I don't hear them, I think that man sold them...crud!! Be well, take care!! Love, Mikki
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Rachel St.Cross
Date: 7/9/2012 2:26:00 PM
‡ John Told Myself Of You, Beautiful Michelle * Tis Exactly What He Said * 'She Is Sooo Beautiful.' ‡
Date: 7/9/2012 10:23:00 AM
Daver, a great poem, very visual, ...David
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