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The Superstitious Gambler

Fate knocked me down with two balled fists robbed me of all with evil twists disabled and a mass of pain and left with naught of lifetime’s gain Rock-hard times hit, no friend in sight no-one to share my sorry plight cash ebbed and dwindled at fast pace starvation hence was what I faced Disturbing thoughts kept creeping in e’er prompting: try your greatest sin compulsion tore apart my soul just one last time; might reach my goal Pep-talked myself: don’t be a fool to challenge Fate without your tools addicted gambler to the core slowly my hopes began to soar With quickened step I pack my load dead rabbit’s foot and ear of toad two badger teeth, balls of live bull a multi-coloured skein of wool And last a gift from one enthroned most prized, a yellow opal stone gained courage with a swig of rum watch out casino, here we come I settle in, touch wood of chair and deftly yank one lock of hair I line up all my lucky charms for further luck pinch left-side arm I moist my lips, give one deep sigh my opal stone winks back, a-fire strong presence in my orb I feel sense Lady Luck spinning her wheel Still certain I will bear no loss I rub each coin twixt fingers crossed the greedy slot accepts them keen I close my eyes, spell L-U-C-K-Y B-E-A-N Incensed, I pull the lever down the gong rings down with loud resound a rapid blink, open-mouthed stare I've just become a millionaire!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2013 5:20:00 PM
What a fantastc poem!!!! Your lucky charms were.......so strangely captivating!!! Oh...I hear Kenny Rogers singing in the background as you rake in the money!!!! Great win on this poem, Licia.
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Date: 5/19/2013 11:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/18/2013 8:45:00 AM
I always know whenever I read one of your poems I will be entertained to the core...This one started out so sad and serious and then...Surprise! (Did you really win a million dollars?) - Tim
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Date: 5/17/2013 7:00:00 PM
Ohhhh.great....wish !!!!! Great ending....one in a million..haha...congratulations
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Date: 5/17/2013 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations with your awesome poem. Delysia, thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 6/25/2011 2:03:00 PM
Hi Delsia, I love your good luck charms and the whole poem tells a marvellous story. Thanks for your visit, I appreciate your kind words. I have read every one of yours and love them all. I'm waiting for more so keep the pen flowing! Luv E :)
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:18:00 PM
wowie, this is a pretty cool poem. I was not expecting it to get so exciting!! And you ended it on a GREAT note instead of making it be a cautionary tale against gambling. Love it!
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Date: 5/10/2011 3:49:00 PM
LOL I never gamble, Delysia. Don't think I could handle the stress. But, ah, the reward of becoming a millionaire! You really have a cool sense for rhyme and meter that add to this very funny poem! Thanks for your comments. Was hoping to see some new work from you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:29:00 PM
yes this one brought smiles of this very creative and funny piece you wrote.
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Date: 4/17/2011 3:00:00 PM
Hello Girlfriend! another super smooth pen, me Squiff. bugger all to suggest to improve. pukka!. may this poem come true. much love, xxxxxx. eph.
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Date: 4/17/2011 8:27:00 AM
I love all of the good luck charms the gambler takes with him/her. Very clever!
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:46:00 AM
Great poem, Delysia - and as for the ending, well, one day, you never know... : )
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:20:00 AM
Wow, I'm sure glad you joined PS, delysia. Your postings are great. Enjoyed everything you've written. Keep "em comin". Awesome piece. Have a super weekend, 'specially since you're now a millionaire! Ha Ha. xxxRalph
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Date: 4/17/2011 3:51:00 AM
Terrific little story Delysia, I so enjoyed this. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:44:00 PM
Wow Girlfriend I could read your poems all night, but then again me wife would suspect me of having an affair hehe. Awesome as usual. MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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