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The Sun I See

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The Sun I See




                                                              Sun
                                                           rays pour
                                                  through the branches,
                                                          I sit under
                                    trees and paint the horizon with my pen.

                               Strokes from my ink flow to each curve I write,
                                                     as drips from the
                                                           sun color
                                                              all I
                                                               see.

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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 5/16/2012 6:13:00 PM
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    This is a wonderful double tetractys. The ink and the sun flowing together.
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 5/16/2012 6:12:00 PM
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    This is a wonderful double tetractys. The ink and the sun flowing together.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/21/2011 11:06:00 PM
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    wow, the more of these I see,( the poems for the Inspiration contest?), the more I realize how lame my own entry is. (unless she goes for a little humor!) How are you today, MIchael. Already it is WEdnesday and time for me to get off here! Maybe I will see one more of yours first though!
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    Date: 6/21/2011 6:43:00 PM
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    Lovely imagery, a poem written in colors of golden light. Love Alexa
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 6/20/2011 2:53:00 PM
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    so great to see u here today my White Knight ... and hoping your weekend was delightful.. still house hunting but down to two special properties.. temp till we get to Italy next year..oh wow.. and kitten hunting but no success..no white persians around that I wanted and were calling to me.. your Jersey Girl in 'hunting' mode..oh..
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 6/19/2011 11:44:00 AM
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    Dear Michael, I enjoyed your analogy of the sun pouring through branches to the ink that rips from your pen. Hope you really didn't miss the contest. This is an exquisite write. Many poets draw their inspiration from nature. Excellent tetractys! Love, Carolyn
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    jack horne
    Date: 6/19/2011 7:23:00 AM
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    Beautiful imagery, Michael. You missed the contest? That is a shame if that's the case.
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 6/19/2011 3:20:00 AM
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    Stunning painting with your words Michael, sorry you missed the contest, but I am glad you posted this gem.. How are you doing? love Wilma
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    James Foulk
    Date: 6/18/2011 4:07:00 PM
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    a great piece of poetry, really enjoyed this one.
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    Date: 6/18/2011 2:45:00 PM
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    I love this poem, i like the gleaming light shining through... about your assignment. OOO! I had to get you good, but knowing you~ You have a sad ballad that will educate all of us with expressed words.... lol... have fun ,..I'll be waiting,..p.d.
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    Date: 6/18/2011 2:43:00 PM
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    " Poetry Assignment# Form:((30 lines +)) Ballad ~~ Category: Sad, slam, confused, and edcucational ~ Title: * Dinner for two * "

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    Edwin Baldwin
    Date: 6/18/2011 1:19:00 PM
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    Nice one Michael, I see the sun was your inspiration as well ... good luck in Chris's great contest

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    nette onclaud
    Date: 6/18/2011 12:56:00 PM
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    utterly exquisite in expressions, michale.. sure winner! :) huggs, nette
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 6/18/2011 11:38:00 AM
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    The poet at his best to paint this blissful state, Michael
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 6/18/2011 10:49:00 AM
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    another magnificent one Michael and I am right there with u luv creating in the outdoors under sun and sky and trees so free... and the storkes from fingers scurrying on the blank pages.. miss u much.. thankxx for your many sweet and wonderful comments my W.K.... your Jersey Girl in writing mode today luv...

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    daver austin
    Date: 6/18/2011 10:11:00 AM
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    Wonderful thing about poetry - the poet can make the Sun drip. Super write, Michael. LOve, daver
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    kash poet
    Date: 6/18/2011 9:39:00 AM
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    Amazing poetry from you Michael....enjoyed very much...best wishes..
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    Robert A. Dufresne
    Date: 6/18/2011 9:08:00 AM
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    beautiful and peaceful write with fine imagery, Michael. I enjoyed it and good luck in this contest

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    jl sadberry
    Date: 6/18/2011 7:59:00 AM
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    Smile, *^_^* Sounds as though the perfect place wherein one would surely wish to forever somewhat be = A sunlit place amid peaceful serenity, my dear friend Michael == One day we all shall be within the utopia's moment everlasting *^_^* Joy unto all then and, thank you, for your kind com; much appreciated *^_^* “Beautiful Poem” === Love, Jasper
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    James Fraser
    Date: 6/18/2011 6:08:00 AM
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    Lovely images flow from your words Michael. It's a shame it missed the contest, I'm sure it would have done well. Have a lovely weekend :)
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