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The Struggling Poet

I am a poet, futile it may seem in the realm I'm in My word lost its essence against the filtered ears of the crowd, It's subtle as the mellow gust of wind, My words are frail, for it can't pierce the thickness of your soul's wall Wall thickened by convention your allowing, But here i am, striving to write the song I'll be singing, hoping to find in writing what's my true meaning, Though my song is not sung and its worth is unseen I'll continue to write till breath to me will part Hoping someday that my words will crush the walls of your soul burn the lace of your limit to free at last your unsettled spirit!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 1:49:00 PM
Yeah, or your own. A great write that I can very well relate to. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:30:00 AM
u don`t need to struggle to all since ur poem is very powerful & u r really a wonderful poet.i like the last line"hoping ............spirit"
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Date: 6/21/2010 9:18:00 AM
Words have such power as we poets all know. Great writing, Juan. Lainie
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:37:00 AM
WOW! I really liked this one Juan. Jeralynn
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Date: 6/21/2010 1:37:00 AM
These words can pierce any soul's walls. .and so your song I am sure. .I'm glad my fingertips led me to read you Juan :) Celene!
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Date: 6/20/2010 10:31:00 PM
VERY Very nicely written. I am impressed! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:48:00 PM
Juan, their seems to be no strugle at all, i do however love the ending of your poem. Still i feel the spirit of the poet flowing in your poem, enjoyed,..p..d
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Date: 6/20/2010 1:26:00 PM
Hi Juan, poetry is never futile, it will always touch the heart of someone. Keep writing, you're doing a great job. Enjoyed your poem very much ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 1:17:00 PM
I love this write! The ending.. I know it will happen. Enjoyed every bit of this. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:27:00 AM
Words do have the power to impact "the walls of the soul," Juan. And they certainly allow the writer's "unsettled spirit" to achieve some freedom. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:09:00 AM
This one is especially good..I like the lines "it cannot pierce the thickness of the walls of your soul"...and also the last six lines...Do you think that the soul becomes harden from what we think or from not letting ourselves feel or acknowledging our emotions?..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:08:00 AM
very well done...you writes are always a pleasure to read.. Michael
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Date: 6/20/2010 5:51:00 AM
Nice inner thoughts well expressed
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