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The Story of Love

THE STORY OF LOVE:  BY LINET KANANA   Some say they walked into love Others say it crept in on them Catching them completely off guard Some believe it fought its way into their hearts What is your story of love?   My friend says she stumbled and fell into it My sister voluntarily jumped into it My brother grew into it While my grandmother? She found herself in it What is your story of love?   Similar strands bind the stories together, …the smile when they narrate their story The dreamy look in their eyes The confidence in their voices that say’’ I have found the real deal’’ This is the love story!   Amazing how the clouds fade and everything looks more beautiful How everything smells much better and even tastes sweeter All over Sudden we notice the colours dancing around us, there is a rainbow in the cloud! We take note of the smiles of kind neighbours, even their annoying dog suddenly looks better We notice the children playing cheerfully on the streets, and their noise sounds beautiful! This is the love story!   The songs sound clearer the loads become lighter The grass seems greener and prettier and we notice the flowers on the paths The raindrops tenderly kiss our skin as listen to the whispers in the wind The head stands higher, the eyes shine brighter, there is Laughter in our voice and smiles linger on Body, soul and spirit, unite in perfect harmony,, when you have a story about love   Whether you fall or grow in love Whether it creeps in you simply find yourself in it Hold on to it, celebrate it and write your story of love!   BY Linet Kanana: The Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/24/2016 7:23:00 PM
Linet, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:25:00 PM
Linet, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 5/20/2014 3:17:00 PM
Wow, amazing piece. Linet. The stories of love do vary, but that feeling in my opinion is what connects all the stories in similarities. Great piece, good imagery, in describing that feeling. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 12/24/2012 1:43:00 AM
I love it! I like how you've described the different aspects of love and the way different people react to it. It's interesting to see the common entity that binds them together - that forever smile entrenched in their hearts. Very well penned Kanana!
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Linet Kanana
Date: 12/27/2012 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Vicky!
Date: 12/19/2012 10:59:00 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Linet. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Linet Kanana
Date: 12/27/2012 11:21:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome Carol!
Date: 12/10/2012 10:25:00 PM
nice and beautiful poem
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Date: 12/27/2012 11:21:00 AM
thanks kenisha!
Date: 12/9/2012 2:46:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, so nice to read your write today. Light & Love
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Linet Kanana
Date: 12/27/2012 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Debbie!

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