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The Sparrows Friend

The last leaf did fall,
winter clouds bring the first storm. Earth rest in slumber. Most birds have gone south. Cold winter winds staying now, sparrows search for food. Some have black and white crowns, some just two tone brown. They hide in the trees. Sun is bright, cold day, rest upon Earths frozen crust. The water is frozen. Birds seek human friends to feed and keep fresh water, with help they survive.

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  1. Date: 6/1/2009 8:42:00 PM
    Oh, this is ominous, frosty, like a funeral drum..I like it=D=D thanks for the experience wiiiii

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 9:50:00 PM
    Lovely with a soft flow and wonderful delivery. Thanks for stopping by my page and commenting on my work. Always appreciated.

  1. Date: 4/14/2009 2:27:00 PM
    Beautiful poetry.... loved the first two lines though, you have your own gifted style here. enjoy your day.

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:25:00 AM
    compassion at its peak, my friend!! i love the presentation and my fav is haiku #4!! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 9:07:00 PM
    A nice way to do haiku..I especially like the 4th stanza. BG

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 11:28:00 AM
    Yes, as do millions of human lives around this world; whom seek caring and compassionate friends and people; that they themselves may survive; many, sadly, if even only another day!? Yet somehow; within someway; I believe that Your write here was pointing to something such as this!? Wonderful compassion and love filled write Judy Riley!:)~"Love & Warmth To 'You & Yours,' John!!"~Have A Glorious Day Dear~Bye!:)

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 10:02:00 AM
    Judy..what a quick response! I just recently added a few new poems...thanks so much for your comments...and your poetry is beautiful!!! I alove the line "Birds seek human friends"..lovely Patricia

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 9:59:00 AM
    Vivid imagery. Ahhh, the beauty of nature. Smiles from Lolita