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The Soul's Journey

The sky embraces The beauty of our love. Unshed tears remain Unreleased as in dark clouds Filled with heavy rain. The colors of the rainbow Hold fast our secrets Shared in separation Forever kept safe In our soul’s dimension. I hear your voice In whispers of the wind As your shadow Walks with mine Hand in hand--- One day my tears Will mingle with the rain As I journey to your side Once again. © 2010 Connie Marcum Wong Contest: Heart and Soul Sponsor Kelly Deschler

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/23/2011 3:55:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem....And it goes to my favs.

The Fringe

Date: 6/30/2011 8:30:00 PM

You are the love that is the sky. And perhaps you and I are expanding into a consciousness that is as large, beautiful, gray, and even passionate as we can imagine. Perhaps we are antennas just beginning to comprehend the idea of expanding creativity, forever leaving behind our habit of reacting. A lifetime of reacting--is that us? I believe we have a destiny with knowing who we are--an awareness of expanding understanding, releassing judgment, and knowing who we are--One with each other.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 6:59:00 AM

A wonderful ensemble of words that collectively conveys beautiful descriptiveness.

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2011 7:25:00 AM

Dear Connie, This free verse touched my very soul. Wonderful heart-felt emotions so beautiful expressed. Thank you for sharing. Lainie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 8:22:00 AM

wow! what a wonderful Journey,, Connie,, enjoyed the beauty of the travle,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 9:59:00 AM

breathtaking imagery and meaning in your beautiful write. Sorry I missed this one here, Connie. I hope to see many new ones up from you, dear. LUv,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 3:53:00 PM

Awesome Connie .. intense write so brilliantly expressed... feel every thought my friend.. wishing u a very Happy New Year in AlohA land... and wishing I were there .. appreciate all your wonderful warm and always welcome comments always..my friend.. still working on Ron to move there permanently.. maybe 2011 wishes will come true luv..thankxxx...

Daver Austin

Date: 12/29/2010 2:28:00 PM

Transcendental write, beautifully expressed. Love, Dave

Constance La France

Date: 12/25/2010 9:45:00 PM

A really beautiful poem, Connie, filled with love and emotions, I can really relate to your words~~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 9:07:00 PM

The soul is a journey,, Merry x-mass Connie,..p.d.

Michael Gelb

Date: 12/25/2010 7:38:00 PM

Nice poem. Thank you for commenting to my poem. I see I'm not the only one home and awake on this day at this hour.